Empty spaces fill me up with gloom
Distant traces with no place left to bloom
It is hard to believe, reality slaps
with cut wings, I try to flap...
Loneliness, grief and solitude flaunt
I can take no more, even shadows haunt
with eyes wide open, I sleep
Heart beats with ache, real real deep...
Engulfed in darkness, swallowed by fire
Sockets meet draught, tears retire
YOU broke your promise, and slept
My body survived, but soul met death...
Distant traces with no place left to bloom
It is hard to believe, reality slaps
with cut wings, I try to flap...
Loneliness, grief and solitude flaunt
I can take no more, even shadows haunt
with eyes wide open, I sleep
Heart beats with ache, real real deep...
Engulfed in darkness, swallowed by fire
Sockets meet draught, tears retire
YOU broke your promise, and slept
My body survived, but soul met death...
Empty spaces fill me up with gloom
Distant traces with no place left to bloom
It is hard to believe, reality slaps
with cut wings, I try to flap...
-Dedicated to the unfortunate survivors of Mangalore Air Crash.
8 comments:
That was a very touchin one... very good start but a sad start :( keep rocking preets!!!
RIP to all the victims , what a sad state of events
Preeti,
It was a very unfortunate accident. Nice of you to dedicate this to all those who perished in that. May God grant eternal peace to all of them and strength to their near & dear ones to bear the sad loss.
Good poem but makes me wonder if it has some more hidden meaning.
Take care
Very touching indeed!
rip their souls :(..
urs..hemu..
none has read and understood this poem..
you have actually dedicated this poem to the 7 odd who survived and is still living with scars on their souls and bodies.. and from the comments here, i can see that very few actually read the whole poem and understand it fully before commenting on it..
@shanmu
hugs shanz :)
@vintage
thanks for coming hea
@jack
I was really upset by what happened. And this is my first attempt at poetry. Hope you liked it :)
@chandrika
glad you liked it :)
@hemz
:)
@chriz
thanks for reading buddy.. hope you liked it.. maiden attempt at poetry..
Maiden attempt? Kudos to you...When I saw the dedication, I went back and read it again..and again...
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