Friday, October 15, 2010

55-Fiction


   A short story needs to be narrated in 55 words or less. So, read on and go thak-thak with your comments.

 
Husband: Dear, been missing you very much since morning.Will work from home, now on.

Wife: a pseudo plastic smile.
 
He holds her waist and travels to her sensitive neck line, and starts kissing.Lecherous. She responds, hoping desperately to forget her first and last love forever and wishing she had a time-turner.

11 comments:

Raman subramanian said...

My first comment is on the redundancy of pseudo/plastic..a plastic smile would have conveyed it all....

Raman subramanian said...

i hope in the time-turner there is no pun intended!

Preeti said...

@raman sir
I ve used a hyperbole :) and yeah, no pun intended.

Matangi Mawley said...

:) ... choice and placement of words- really good!

Jack said...

Preeti,

Read all pending posts now after my break. Post about your father is very touching. If I was an animal, I 'd be my sister. LOL. Do you know that Banyan tree never allows anything to grow under it? Movie review is very frank. This post clearly shows what happens when you marry someone other than you had loved.

Take care

Unknown said...

i didnt anything at all...:(

Annapoorani Sivaramakrishnan said...

Cutely written one..but but story yenaku konjam puriyardu and konjam puriyala...especially last few words I could not make out the conclusion.

Preeti said...

@matangi
thanks !!:)

@Jack
Thanks for coming back Jack. Missed your posts too.

@Palani
read read read till you succeed :)

@annapoorani
55 words.. readers are welcome to unleash their imagination and comprehend the conclusions :)

Amrit said...

Pseudo plastic...yaahh..that tells all. Nice posts. Will read more.

Preeti said...

@A
thanks A:)

Anonymous said...

Hi Preeti,

We are doing a study in India on cosmetic product for Korean company and some Korean would like to meet you between 3,4,5th in Delhi and 7,8,9th in Mumbai hence we would like to request you give some spare time for this project.

Thanks & Regards,

Arvind
email: arvind@markelytics.com